need some help for my map.......on how to build and fill my map Archived · read-only

I am sorry if i posted this on the wrong place ... i am a noob who doesnt know many things about Minecraft! Angel

hello people...this is my first map....please test it out and tell me how it is as my first map...please no bad comments...just tell me if it is a bad map or a good map (for beginners)
Link : My First Map
Come on ....som 1 tell me somthing!